How can you say something happy
or how about something snappy
when your heart is like a dungeon
and everything is torn from within?
It’s all dark inside
with no place to hide
not a hole in sight
that shows any light
Outside you are smiling
but inside you are crying
Can you make it?
can you take it?
I
Can.
I am so cheating with my next four poems.
I found them when I was cleaning out my
Poetry drawer. they technicly should go in my
1st works page, but OH WELL!








We all can make it if we try hard !
Wonderful lines.
Here’s the lady [award] for you : http://ladynimue.wordpress.com/2011/04/09/creative-one/
Well done! I really like the lines, “It’s all dark inside//with no place to hide//not a hole in sight//that shows any light” Excellent!
Your heart may be like a dungeon but your head knows freedom.
Your heart is like a dungeon: so sad. An excellent poem.
Excellent post thanks for sharing this. I enjoy reading your blog very much. Reading poems is something I truly enjoy. It’s very relaxing and soothing.
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