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Charlie Parant
__Submitted to Jingle’s Thursday Rally Week 41: http://thursdaypoetsrallypoetry.blogspot.com/________________________________________________________________________________________________
So Tired
I do not know my head.
I am so tired
I think I’ve lost my mind
I lay here
beg
plead
That I am given more time.
I am so so tired
I kind of feel lost
If I were to disappear tomorrow
would there be a cost?
All I have wanted
in this life of mine
was to live
love
I try to have hope
every single day
but somehow i feel
It all slipping away.
I am so tired.
Luna
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I try to have hope
every single day
but somehow i feel
It all slipping away.
I am so tired.
My mind at present.. very well written! Relate-able.. Many hugs x
i know how it feels, some days you don’t feel like waking up at all, some days you wanted to doze off in the office.
a great write, Luna.
take care!
Thoughtful, moving. An amazing snapshot of an emotion we all feel from time to time.
A truly dour yet power provoking write
Just keep up! Sounds like a very inspiring dream of life, though that kind of life is the one that kills us faster… living to help others. Noble cause 🙂
oh how wonderful. I love it truly.
http://bttrflyscar.blogspot.com/2011/04/cassia.html
hooh! lucky your tiredness did not wear me down haha. my thursday post : http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/06/20/me-before-us/
I hope your ‘tired’ does not detour you from writing and sharing your poetry. There is nothing like giving yourself to the ‘muse’ to feel better
warm regards and peaceful realities
jeanne
When I am depressed I do feel like this. It is a sad and lonely place at times especially when you have no one to go to 😦
This poem brought me to a place I wish to escape, bon, enjoy the rally!
http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/04/22/on-peace-and-wisdom-haiku-poem-ing-on/
To feel that tired is a hard place to be in–I can feel the emotion so deeply in this, Luna. Beautifully done.