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Charlie Parant
__Submitted to Jingle’s Thursday Rally Week 41: http://thursdaypoetsrallypoetry.blogspot.com/________________________________________________________________________________________________
So Tired
I do not know my head.
I am so tired
I think I’ve lost my mind
I lay here
beg
plead
That I am given more time.
I am so so tired
I kind of feel lost
If I were to disappear tomorrow
would there be a cost?
All I have wanted
in this life of mine
was to live
love
I try to have hope
every single day
but somehow i feel
It all slipping away.
I am so tired.
Luna
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Although it is a sad read Luna, you have expressed it very well. I know of these times…if anything, it makes you stronger and wiser.
Certainly above all…get rest-body and mind.
Your exhaustion communicates and though you are tired, yur words are strong.
Oh I have so felt this way time and again. You express this well. The last stanza especially seals it for me.
This was so so good !!!
Sorry I could not be regular at your blog ’cause of laptop issues and then some more …
Hope to be back reading all that I missed !
hey you’ve expressed your emotions so simply and completely……..it’s beautiful 🙂
I’ve just found your site and find this sad tired poem and wish you well.
ahhh thats so touching Luna….as if u just mirrored my feelings in your poem…I am so tired myself these days…oh i so loved this…
Very nice Luna, feel that tiredness sometimes but something just will not let me stop… very nice write!!
I loved this poem and not because I am so tired. It epitomizes the restless at night can’t sleep better than anything I’ve read. Thanks also for coming by to comment on my site.