If I could only give you one thing
It would be hope
Hope for anything.
If I could help you
in your pain
I would make it so
only knowledge
you would gain.
If I could tell you one thing
It would be that you are not alone
just give me a ring
or a text or shout
you can take any route.
It doesn’t matter what it is about
If I could give you only one thing
It would be the courage
to stand up and sing.
I would take away your stife
no more rife
for you
today.







At least you try… And beautifully! 🙂
This is beautiful and I agree the repetition really is powerful
I like this piece! Encouraging yet symbolic! Great job.
Miki
Nice piece, love the hope offered here for the hurting soul.
I didn’t know that.
No (if), mission accomplished. Thanks…
These are lovely gifts you offer…..especially hope and the courage to sing. 🙂
Very Nice !
Yes, I love the refrain.
Love the repeated line, If I could give you only one thing… A timeless poem written from pure friendship and love, Luna. I enjoyed this very much. Peace, Amy