Please watch this video it is a very beautiful song by Disturbed.
There is no way I could ever do this song justice in any homage.
but here is what popped out of my head.
please enjoy my lousy poem
Darkness in my soul.
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Darkness in my Soul
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You took away my light
Everything had been bright
I have to believe
Everything fell apart at the seems
Darkness is now in my soul
Please hold me
One last time
Before my day grows cold
Do you hear what I am saying?
Can you get me through this day?
This year?
Before everything then turns to tears?
Because of you,
The darkness is now in my soul
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I am going to a Sammy Hagar concert tonight
So I will do another poem
based off of a song from him in the morning.
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Love & Light
Luna







I like the idea of light and darkness… Well done!
This is wonderful … I do indeed hope that the day of darkness recedes for you as I know that it will.
well done.
🙂
you certainly have a way with words..it truly touched the heart strings…
Oh my Gawd!
This touched me for sure.. a powerful and touching write..
Luna, there is something about your words those connects beautifully to life.. 🙂
Hugs xox
Touching and so sad… Listening to the song together with reading the poem makes me cry… Sweet!
Absolutely love the poem Maybe you can Join our forum and post it on the creative arts section alot of Disturbed Fans would love to see this.
Beautiful song and such a beautiful poem truly enjoyed them both