We lay upon an earthen bed
surrounded by the trees
there was nothing else in the world
only you and me.
~
The summer rain upon our cheeks
as we lay so still
remembering how earlier
the sound of the whipperwill
~
As it landed on my shoulder
and sang us a pretty song
the magic that surrouded
still lasts all day long
~
I remember how you felt
my hand upon your cheek
for the first time ever
I didn’t feel meek.
~
I remember
I remember
when will I stop?








OH! GOsh! lovely piece of writing straight from your heart…Superb imagery indeed… Thanks for share…
well played, Thanks for linking.
I like the first stanza. It sets the mood instantaneously! π
Love this. The picture is so right too.
Haunting write full of veracity. Thank you for sharing it. Great picture too.
Great flow and rhyme. A good depiction of the bittersweetness of some memories.
thank you. its a daily struggle for me.