The air is magic
as you take my hand
twilight birds are serinading
you are my Galahad.
~
your breath upon my neck
you softly say my name
knees get week
your turning me into a wreck…
~
caressing my arms
you lick my skin
i turn in your arms
to melt once again.
~
breathing gets rough
as we go to touch
you tell me i’m beautiful
and tour voice is gruff.
~
buttons pop
as we sink to the floor
as the clothes come off
wanting, needing,more.
~
holding my arms down
so i cannot touch
“Naughty girl, you’ll get yours soon enough”
~
one lick to a nipple
than sits and waits
writhing and squirming as the air hits my skin
arms still pinned, I watch him grin.
~
a lick here, a lick there
ever so slowly
you lick down my skin
until you find, the hidden peach within.
~
then there is nothing
but the raged breathing
to let me go, and plunge your hardness within
~
just when I cant take anymore
you grab me tight
and slide your hard piece of heaven in
~
arms finally freed
the beast is unleashed
screaming with passion
I get just what I need.
~
Flipped over now
its my turn to play
and miss nice girl has left for the day
~
sliding up a wee bite to your chin
sliding down a rake upon your skin
back a lick or two
forth sucking you.
~
I scream
you roar
thats when we realize
its the forest floor
and as we lay there
with leaves sticking within
we look at each other
and grin.







What I think works well is starting from the magical air, in the romance-inspiring environment, thinking of him as Galahad, then going into lovemaking and abandon to the degree that the surroundings are completely forgotten until the feeling of the sticking leaves come into awareness afterward.
Wow! Suddenly, I don’t feel like folding laundry any more!
Nice, I love the forest imagery, much appreciated, thank you, WS
wow some hot stuff going on here…i like this….
This topic is making for some steamy reading. Nice work.
Holy smokes! Is it me or is it hot in here?
Smiling…I love “miss nice girl has left for the day”!
Awesome!
Now I’m going to take a cold shower! 😉
Make Sweet Love To Me
ooh la la, a passionate moment, filled with laughter, I dig it!! 🙂 cool write!!
Enjoy the potluck!!!
http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/08/14/smokescreen/
Thanks for sharing …
prayers for your mom,
peace, easy, and stay strong, love your enthusiasm and keep it up.
hot, well put!
Wonderful erotic writing! Very realistic!
Here’s my offering for Potluck 48: http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/08/14/the-lake/