i want to touch you
i want to taste you
feel your skin upon my lips
i want to feel you
i want to hear you
hear my name upon your lips
i want to see you
i want to love you
hold your hand
take you to a new land
i want to squeeze you
i want to tease you
And forever please you
Blessed be my friends







Another nice bit of writing, Luna. Well done.
Here is my second post for this week: http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/08/18/i-am-loved/
Blessed be your friends indeed!
Wonderfully direct! Love it. : ) This could be a song.
What was I saying? Want is important… I like your poem, Luna!
Hmm..very sensual indeed.
Thanks for sharing.
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Congratulations also on being featured in the special interview over at Jingle Poetry!
whoosa!!! hmmm bold, bold, bold, I like!!!
I know that feeling quite too well, good job!
Happy potluck!!
http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/08/14/smokescreen/
great write.
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Nice one. I like it a lot.