You look at me
Disguest in your eyes
Thinking thoughts
You try to hide
Thinking that you
Know the truth
Assuming I would
lie to you.
Judging me the way
You do,
Taking me away from
You.
Why do you think
Im just like them?
That what im doing
Is a sin..
Believing…
If I didnt do the
Sh*t I do,
Than I wouldnt have
The pain I put myself
Through?
Judging…
You assume im just
Like them, “she’s becoming
Unstable! Dont let her in!”
Disbelieving,
What I say is true,
When was the last time
I lied to you?
Thinking that you
Know the truth..
Taking me away from
You.
You look at me
Anger fills your eyes
You dont even realize,
Not to bother to see
What’s truly there?
Even though,
I think you still care?
Assuming that you know
The truth,
Not caring that I
Miss you.
Taking…
You took away
My bright day
Not even giving me
A say.
You took part of my warmth away
Taking, keeping me at bay.
Judging…
You judge the reality
Of what you see.
You judge the truth
Of that which is
Me.
To blinded to see
Whats in front of you
Your throwing me away
From you!
I dont need you!
Screw you than!
Thats the first lie
Ive told you
Since you were
Ten.
ML.
Blessed be my friends







Powerful, beautiful words. I truely enjoyed this.
The Lonely Recluse.
oh god, your awesome! nice flow, whoever is this poem meant for must’ve felt it like a spear to the chest.
the poem is also a paradox. truths said as lies. ooh how i love paradoxes. =D nice poem!
If only I had the guts. Lol
When someone special doesn’t believe it cuts deeply, tearing away at the soul. The truth goes along with trust. If you don’t trust you can’t believe. Trust has to be grounded on both sides of the bridge for truth to walk across.
Terrific treatise on judgment. I, for one, have learned to let that habit go by the wayside.
A very emotional piece. : (
How tragic — mistrust and its aftermath.
Powerful poem.
Thank you for sharing this.
This is so afflicting… I could totally relate to this because I am somewhat in such a state now…
*Speechless*, yeah, I am now.. my eyes, tears sit in but they just roll and wont flow…
Anyway, here is mine for the rally.. http://www.tingtasy.com/2011/03/collections-of-tings-poetry-tpmar101.html
Hope to see you around.. 🙂
Whoever this is, I’m hoping you get rid of him for good! Write out the pain and be a new person in the morning.
powerful, love the wisdom in it.
Cheers,
🙂
You cannot lie that this is full of emotions 🙂