( I pulled this out of my old poetry book, ‘Tangled Lies,Soft Sighs & Alibies” in homage to my daughter who is far from home, but is close to my heart.)
Just because I left
don’t mean I don’t love you
Just because I left
it doesn’t mean i don’t care
Just because I left
don’t mean
I’m not your little girl anymore.
I need my mommy
I need My dad
Just because I left
it don’t mean I’m not sad.
We all have dreams we want to follow
We all have things we want to share
When I wake from bad dreams
I still want you there.
I wanted to stay
I needed to go
What was I supposed to do?
I don’t know.
I left..
But I love you so.
Please don’t get angry
Please dont be sad
I’m still your little girl
and I need my mom and dad.
I love you both








talented work.
keep it up.
Very sweet and it touched me loads. I felt for it especially as I just left home last year…t
very heart touching poem. beautifully written, sensitive.
trisha
I can relate to this.
A lovely expression of caring. Not many 19 year olds have the courage to leave home these days.
Very sweet and rings true!
Very, very sweet. Well done!
Here from Cloaked Monk for the March 15 challenge. I’d say you’ve risen well to it. Poem on …
These are the words of a very wise young lady! We should definitely follow our dreams though it may be hard to be away from home. 🙂 How old were you when you wrote this?
Thanx 🙂 I was 19 @ the time I wrote this, im 36 now & my daughter is 19.
I hope and pray my daughter will have this reflection when she leaves! I love the shaping and the flow.