Why am I so angry?
Why can’t I cry?
Why can’t I tell her,
how I feel inside?
Why?
Why wasn’t I……?
Why couldn’t she say?
I was good enough?
Why?
Why could she not see?
I loved her too?
Why could SHE not say,
Hey! I love you?
Why?
Why did she leave me?
Why did she not look back?
Why did she act like I
was a needle in her eye?
Why?
Why am i so angry?
Why can’t I cry?
Why do I miss her?
I don’t know…
Why.
Why?
Why did she not love me?
Why was she not there?
Why am I so hurt inside?
Why do I care?
Why?








heartbreaking, poignant, intense
Love deprivation expressed wonderfully 🙂
Painful questions … why can hurt really much … Sometimes is better if you don’t care, but how? Heartfelt poem! Thanks for sharing!
Do these questions ever let us rest ?
Wonderfully written …
I wonder why I could relate to your poem.. and yet, I couldn’t answer any of the questions either.. poignant.. well written verses.. very questioning!
Here’s My Potluck
“why do i care?”
i guess more than that its more about “why do i “still “care?”
strong and simple and thus such an impact
Those why.. the many whys…
A poem written so true, so strong, so helplessly it is.. It made me stop to wonder, how many of us actually realised how much we may be unknowingly hurting another…
A great poem, I have to say.. on how you ended it with why..
*HUG*
Here is mine, http://www.tingtasy.com/2011/03/collections-of-tings-poetry-tp20-that.html
Hope to see you..
very strong emotions, well done…
bless you.
A++
This is more than good enough! Love it 🙂
Luna, this is so poignant. I think so many can related to the feelings you express so clearly. Thank God we have poetry to help us express it.