Thank You Jingle for This Award!
I tottaly accept 🙂
and I wish to nominate
Charlie Parant
__Submitted to Jingle’s Thursday Rally Week 41: http://thursdaypoetsrallypoetry.blogspot.com/________________________________________________________________________________________________
So Tired
I do not know my head.
I am so tired
I think I’ve lost my mind
I lay here
beg
plead
That I am given more time.
I am so so tired
I kind of feel lost
If I were to disappear tomorrow
would there be a cost?
All I have wanted
in this life of mine
was to live
love
I try to have hope
every single day
but somehow i feel
It all slipping away.
I am so tired.
Luna
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i feel the sentiments in this one. i think all of us has at one point reached this state. nice poem luna! as expected! check mine later too aight? =)
I have felt this many times…..that you feel lost and cant cope, that thngs you want in this life just seem to drift away & all you want is to rest be at peace but it seems hard..
tx for the award & for the chance to enter you Poetry Month Contest…
My Link:http://mypoetrywriting.blogspot.com/2011/04/love-lost-tossed.html
Ahh Luna, you penned down a feeling that strikes big at many times…
You’re tired because you do so much for others, like sharing this lovely poem and relating to us! Thank you so much Luna and pamper yourself once in a while. If I’m near I could give you a could back massage 🙂
I think we all feel this way sometime or the other.
Only how we overcome it differs.
I love the simplicity and the pure raw emotions in the poem.
keep it up.
This speaks to me.
well done.
🙂
Wow … you conveyed the tiredness so literally. Bless you … may hope wrap itself around you every day 🙂
Luna~
With this piece you illuminate the depths of exhaustion each of us has felt at one time or another. A very relatable piece.
Gee, that’s so sad. Hope you feel better, soon. : (
Wow Luna, you wrote this well I can feel the pain. Please take care!
thanx, i think i’m just going to sleep today…:)