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The summer storms
are so wild
they make me feel
just like a child
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Thunder crashes
lightning booms
I feel the tremble
throughout all the rooms
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I run outside
I skip and dance
the thunderstorm
puts me in a trance
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Childlike glee
comes over me
I raise my arms up high
and scream at the sky
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The rain sweeps in
all I can do is grin
as I become
soaked to the skin
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The summer storms
break the skies
the exquisite smells are abound
as I sing and dance around
Summer storms please come back soon
you make me want to swim with joy
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Written with help from my daughter Ashley.
Scarlet Luna-Mia Lombardi | Luna the moon Rose 
Ohh, you captured it so well … if only, we could get some rain … I would dance in it as well … I want to swim with joy! š Congratulations to Ashley for her assistance for a successful write!
Excellent write…so much joy captured within each stanza.
Lovely Luna. Oh, how I wish to dance in the rain. Feel better. This was wonderful.
I love it that your daughter had a part in writing this. You captured the magic of summer storms–I can almost smell the air!
I love the musicality of this, I too love the summer rain and the child like feelings walking in it brings. Thank you for sharing this.
hey this is nice. I like it. Long too…which I personally think is awesome.
Lovely! I love walking and dancing in the rain, but thunderstorms are another thing altogether! Too dangerous in my book – I’m too tall! Makes me feel like a lightning magnet! š
Lucky you to have Ashley writing with you – what fun!
Lovely, I love to walk in a warm, gentle rain. Not so sure I’d be out there splashing in the puddles in a thunder strom though..LOL
keep dancing …
join us tonight, blessings
I like your rhyme and rhythm. What would you think about this:
change the 2nd line to – Are wet and wild
2nd stanza 4th line to – Through all the rooms
last 2 lines to a 4 line stanza –
Oh, summer storms!
Please come back soon,
That I may swim
With joy, swoon.
Just some thoughts. Sorry for the intrusion if they aren’t good ones. š