In questa stanzi
lui e in piedi
davanti alla parete
io la vedo
vede lui a me?
~
Io chiudo gli occhi per un momento
penso che io vedere prima che lui
Io la vedo a mi sogno
Lo apro gli occhi…
~
~
Lei e daventi a me
lei mi parla
lui mi dice il suo nome
Lei parli
c’era una volta
penso lei a il mito
dimmi lei sentire ala etta?
~
scusa il ritarto
non ti preoccupare
lei lo mi cuore
Ci siamo innamorate
sulla di giorno
Io ricardo piu molti bene
~
In questa stanzi
Lei e in piedi davanti alla parete
Era l’amore a prima rista
~
mani e mani in piedi
vadi vengi
alle bellisimo notte.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ENGLISH ANYONE?
In this room
He is standing
in front of the wall
I see him
Does He sees me?
~
I close my eyes for a moment
I think I’ve seen him before
I ‘ve seen him in my dreams
I open my eyes …
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You and me together
~
~
He speaks to me
He tells me his name
He speaks
Once upon a time
I think is He myth
tell me I’ve felt this before ?
~
excuse me I remember
do not worry
He Loves me
We love
This day
We both do remember
~
In this room
He and I are standing in front of the wall
It was love at first Sight
~
hands in hand
we walk into
the beautiful night.
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I can never spell right in Italian as well so I thought I would give you guys a double treat.
Luna







Lovely emotions Mia! love from first sight … sweet and innocent!
Here is my Rally http://brokensparkles.wordpress.com/2011/07/31/musings/
Aw this is very romantic. I believe in love a first sight too. I loved reading both versions but I do think it sounds more romantic in Italian 🙂
Awesome writing .. loved it .. <3..
A very romantic poem. Well done! 🙂
short but very romantic. i liked “hand in hand we walk into the beautiful night.”
Yeah, the English version for me too, Luna, thank you 🙂 And such romantic poetry.. the He tossed in between the lines first made me think it was God you were talking of.
My Poem ~ Vicissitude of thought
Beautiful romantic story… Love the narration and structure! Unfortunately, I don’t understand anything in Italian;P
so beautiful — the poem and the smile I see when you wrote this 🙂
i must admit, the italian was beautiful but obviously, i can relate to the english better. beautiful post nonetheless.
Yes, thank you, I’ll take the English version. I was just thinking that it would be nice for you to read this in Italian–you know how some people have those recordings on their blogs? Wouldn’t that be fun?
A very beautiful sentiment–some people do fall in love at first sight–I believe it.