This past month I was knocking on heavens door.
They kept it shut
Said Mia you have to wait some more.
I pounded n begged
Dropped to my knees n plead
Pretty pretty please.
I hurt so bad
N im so sad
All I have are my girls,him
And my dad.
Please let me in
Forgive me all my sins.
Bright lights
Doctors whites
A strong hand gripping mine tight
Pleading with me to be allright
I looked down
Turned around
And stopped knocking on heavens door.
Goodreads
Scarlet Luna-Mia Lombardi | Luna the moon Rose 
hope that you feel better now.
prayers,
love, forgive, and live to give, smiles.
loved your talent and your style.
Merry Christmas,
Thanks for serving Jingle Poetry Community,
Stay Blessed,
Have fun!
Cheers.
Come to our week 19 poetry picnic today, have fun sharing.
Morning..
xoxox
You must have been in so much pain to have scribed this. I hope you are feeling much better now and that everything’s okay. Full of emotion, your poem; lovely except for the fact of your suffering. x
Thank goodness you are over it and, didn’t get to go through the door. Who will be mom to your girls if you had gone?